from growing love to fears and races...
from reality to illusions??!
from what was to what is....
more steps backward than ahead...
from openin up to shutting her out...
from unmatched warmth to shivering cold..
from closest to far away...
from two to together and back..
from complements to differences...
from US to U and I..
jerky journey.. what say?
exciting? thrilling?
well...
the little girl must find her own way..
n she is still screaming out..
hmm...
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a little girl playing in the garden
a little heart screaming out
held her hand, made her secure
loved her 'life',
her unrefined self...
stood beside her, dint let her wander away
stars shining, moon smiling..
passion, intimacy...
unmeasured depths...
urge to complete each other...
n d need to know.. n share
Seemed everlasting....
Culd'nt have asked for more...
Bang! Thud! Boom!
from a vulnerable mind to a vulnerable soul...
30-05-05
Hm.. now that u finished reading, It is one poem alright.. but was written in 2 halves as u might have already noticed.. the little secret is that, whichever half u read first, as a poem it still makes sense.. Try it..
A little wierd n not really ordinary.. Ahem! do I sound proud..? Well.. I am.. :)
On a more serious note, this is proly the most incomplete poem I ve ever written.. incomplete in every way. nothing more, nothing less..
Tuesday, May 30, 2006
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4 comments:
Stick to photography, your poems get darker by the day!!
Btw, I see you're quite proficient with your camera..cool!
u sure have a way with words!
@harsha: he he! thats an oooooolllld poem.. :) the latest one is one two posts before this.. chk that out! thanks so much da, but its not my camera..! :(
@anoop: am flattered! thank u! :)
Lady, the bored public clamours for MORE MORE!!
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